标准四段十三句（两个相同观点）
art & tech
第一段: 总结， 引出总论点
第一句， 用另一种表述方式转述考试题目
In the age of X1 is thriving rapidly everyday and incredible supports for human like … are deniable, X2 is still no less important when people rate the value of X2 very high.
第二句， 我的总论点（支持，反对……）
Indeed, there are some affects from … to soul of human that … never can do.
第二段： 抛出分论点一， 论证
第三句， 提出分论点1
One thing X1 teach us where X2 is silent is the appreciation of life.
第四句，第五句 阐述分论点1（展开）
We are surrounded by nature which is rare combination of science and art.
If we leave out the art and beauty from nature, it would become a dull theory of how molecules work together.
第六句， 举例支持分论点1
To give an example, if we listen to the music of Mozart, we can learn about harmony and joy through the medium of music or if we read classical novels, the past world reveals itself to us.
第七句， 总结， 分论点1成立
Thus, when we look back at the stars in a dark night, we appreciate the beauty and art have taught us to appreciate this beauty..
第三段： 抛出分论点二， 论证
第八句 提出分论点2
The great artists tell us about the true joys of life.
第九， 第十句， 阐述分论点2（展开）
A classic book can teach us more about life than a biology book can.
第十一句， 举例支持分论点2
To give an example, we do not need understand arts to appreciate music, books or art exhibition but we need to understand scientfic theories to understand how something really works.
第十二句， 总结， 分论点2成立
Thus, the artists reflect life and teach us to learn about our inner-value.
第四段： 总结论点， 首尾呼应
第十三句， 总论点成立
To conclude, science and technology have made our physical world more comfortable in this century and will keep bringing new wonders in our daily life, arts and humanities have taught us to appreciate life, to live for a reason.
标准四段十三句（观点和措施）
anti-social behavior
第一段: 总结， 引出总论点
第一句， 用另一种表述方式转述考试题目
In the age of social is developing rapidly everyday, the widespread problem of X towards others has long been a major topic of concern in society.
第二句， 我的总论点（支持，反对……）
Some of major culprits of this problem will be discussed before the most important solutions are drawn.
第二段： 抛出分论点一， 观点
第三句， 提出分论点1
People may hold an anti-social attitude or disrespect others because their living environment.
第四句，第五句 阐述分论点1（展开）
Living in an enviroment where violence and discrimination are the norms is severely harmful to a child.
第六句， 举例支持分论点1
To give an example, children of sexist parents in rural families in Vietnan, irrespective of their gender, show a worring tendency of disrespecting women, or children of busy parents who are indifferent to childhood education show indifferent in others too.
第七句， 总结， 分论点1成立
Thus, when there is no none to help young children distinguish between the good and the bad, ill-mannered attitudes may emerge and develop among them without being controlled
第三段 抛出分论点二，措施
第八句 提出分论点2
A number of definite actions could be taken to mitigate the problem.
第九句， 措施1
On the national level, the first obvious solution is to reduce violence and discrimination.
As this would be a massive act, the all voters and legislators should be responsible.
第十句， 措施2
On the nuclear-family level, parents must not underestimate the significance of their guidance for children.
第十一局， 总结
These actions, albeit small or not, could have a strong influence on children when they mature.
第四段： 总结论点， 首尾呼应
第十二句， 总论点成立
To conclude, it is clear that violence, discrimination and the indifference of parents to children education are the major catalysts for increase in anti-social behaviour and disrespect for others.
Strong measures, such as stringent law enforcement on violent and discriminatory acts, must be taken to alleviate this distressing situation.
反 正 升， 四段十三句
第一段: 总结， 引出总论点
future & present
第一句， 转述题目
While X1 has been the most crucial aspect of human life, some people argue that instead of worring about X2, we should … .
第二句， 引出观点
This approach certainly has its own benefits, but I believe that xxx is more advantageous for a person who wants to succeed in his life.
第二段： 抛出分论点一， 观点，反
第三句， 提出分论点1
The present may command more of our primary attention and fucused efforts due to its immediacy.
第四句， 第五句， 阐述分论点1（展开）
The present very quickly becomes the past, so in order to not waste time we need to be conscious of the fact that the present is happening and will not be repeated.
第六局， 举例支持分论点1
To give an example, people sometimes regret not having enjoyed a particular moment or event more as it was happening because they were too busy or dictracted by other things at the time.
第七句， 总结， 分论点1成立
Thus， it is necessary to focus on the present as the consequences of current actions can be immediate.
第三段， 抛出分论点一， 观点，正
第八句， 提出分论点2
However， the future always hold a lot of promise and potential.
第九句、第十句， 阐述分论点2（展开）
Planning for future is critical in order to take advantage of the opportunities which exist to improve things and achieve what we want.
Without planning for the future, when the time arrives we may find that we are not prepared or in a position to maximize the opportunities.
第十一句， 举例支持分论点2
To give an example， many people and countries obviously make plans which they hope will come to fruition in the longer term.
第十二句， 总结， 分论点2成立
Thus，our future plans are what shape many of our daily activities， in other words what we are doing today. =
第四段：总结论点， 首尾呼应
第十三句， 总论点成立
To conclude, planning for the future gives us the ability to have some sense of direction and ability to measure our progress towards a goal. Without considering the future in advance, much of our time in the present might be wasted wondering what to focus on or which activities are most important.
